Day 59… Day 58 Redux*… Three Voices

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1:  (BIG voice)…  “Just. Who. Do. You. Think. You. Are?!”

2:  (little me voice)… “OMG!  I am blown away by this opportunity!!!”

3:  (small still voice within)…  “Give freely of your self…”

calls me…

to seek a connection with what i see and that which waits to speak

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 Mirror Image

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*an exercise in revision…

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Reference: Brevity… Craft Essay by Cynthia Newberry Martin

Not Every Sentence Can Be Great But Every Sentence Must Be Good

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2 thoughts on “Day 59… Day 58 Redux*… Three Voices

  1. Nice revision, Helena. And thanks for reading the essay.
    I’ve felt so bad the last few days. I guess that’s how I missed this post. But I feel better now : )

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